literature

Goodbye

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A mother's decision
Overruling my own
Instictively i choose to surrender
I can win the battle not the war
Choosing not to say something I might regret
Into the night i slip away
Waiting for a mother's worried face
Wanting her to bleed feel the pain
Funny how screams can make you forget
That maybe love is really not meant
I feel like i hate you
I feel you don't care
You are always unjust
Always unfair
You've locked me in prison cell
I can not escape
Nonetheless try to break
You've torn off my wings
Broken my arms
Left me to rot
Unable to fly
You have chosen to encase me
For the years that are still to come
Treating me as a child
When i've matured so fast
You leave my wounds open
Then pack them with salt
Why teach me to walk?
Do you not have me crawling
I mean no harm towards you
But why are you controlling my life?
That's it I give up
I dare not change your mind
And with these final words mom
To you all I say is
Goodbye...
this was written when I was mad at my mom right so here is the product
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Cariassus's avatar
bloody hell..strong resentment really shown there..very good poem a fav, very emotive and builds and drops and keeps the reader on the edge..very nice :glomp: