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Winter night

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In the night I stand
the moon light shining upon me
I'm waiting for him
but he won't come

I've waited so long
For his arms to embrace me
His love surrounding my being
Waiting..for my fears to be driven away
my fears to be driven away

Someone is steping out of the shadow
I wonder, could it be him?
but it's another stranger again
What is keeping him from me?

My heart is beating loudly
Should I walk away from here?
Never once calling to reassure his presence
Just another broken promise
Yup another joint poem written by me and ~Nimgil this poem is so sweet I am in love with it I won't ruin it for you guys though so read it I am sure you all will love it too although yes it is sad I won't lie however that doesn't change the fact that it is an awesome poem so please take time to read it and ENJOY!!
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Cariassus
hmm...i think im your twos greatest critic...major apologies for that...i like the general flow of the poem. It would be nice to know who wrote which bits. like the style and the general topic. and although not one of either of yous stronger efforts a very solid poem..so well done..its a fav :D heh :glomp: